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Rydko
A/N: I wrote this in the 8th grade for an english project so don't be too harsh

Scene 1: Into the Camp

Narrator: (Narrator is not seen until end of play) In the year 1943, the Nazi finally reaches to the house of Nesia’s family, a small one of her mother, father, her younger sister, and she, all were strong believers of the Jewish faith. Yet like everyone else they where afraid of Adolf Hitler and the Nazi party, so they kept their faith a secret. But then someone tipped the Nazis off that they were Jews and on the morning of October, the pounding on the door woke everyone up, even the heavy sleeper that Nesia’s sister was, woke up with alarm. They knew it was pointless of hiding now for they had no time; the Nazi’s soldiers were now kicking the door open. The next events were a blur to Nesia. The soldiers separated her mother, sister, and her from her dad, put them on a box cart train. And went without food and water for three days (miraculously they all survive but are in poor condition) they got to the camp where she was separated with her sister for she was 9 years old. Her mother was shot on the spot because she protested that her sister was older. Nesia was alone when she walked to the ghettos, the day before was her birthday, and Nesia was 12 years old.

(The scene opens in a house that is not even finished, just some concrete and no furniture. A couple of Nazi soldiers stand in the corner. Nesia is in the corner with her knees to her chest. Gila, a happy, fifteen year Jewish girl, comes to were Nesia is and sit downs in front of her.)

Gila: Hey what’s wrong with you? (Pause then speaks with a playful tone) Did someone take your doll?

Nesia: (half smiles) No one took my doll. (points finger towards Nazi soldiers) But they took everything. (starts crying) And now I’m alone here and I don’t even know where here is.

Gila: (place hand on Nesia’s back) Well I’ll tell two things. One you are in a concentration camp that is watched by the Nazi soldiers. The rule here is to work hard and you won’t be killed (Nesia shudders at the thought) don’t worry I will help you. (place other hand on shoulder and smiles) And two you are not alone anymore.

(Nesia stops crying and smiles, bell rings)

Gila: That’s the bell we better hurry before they stop passing the bread out.

(Nesia wipes her tears as Gila pulls her up and to the table where they were passing the bread out. Gila goes to one lady who has a bit more bread than everyone else, Nesia following.)

Gila: Sophie this is Nesia, she with me.

Sophie: (smiles) So how are you Nesia?

Nesia: (smiles) I’m fine (Sophie hands Nesia a loaf and a half of a loaf bread)

Gila: (whispers to Nesia) You need to eat this fast because no one is supposed to get this much bread. (Nesia look down at the bread frowning)

Nesia: Is this lunch?

Gila: (Shaking her head) No this is breakfast, lunch, and dinner, so savor it. They (snarling at the guards) don’t think we need much food so they give us this. (Exits off stage with Nesia, blackout)

Narrator: Nesia didn’t yet really understand the true horrors to the camp and slept restlessly through the night with fits from her nightmares. And the next morning she awoke with a kick from the guard and was lead to construction site. She worked with Gila and a 14-year-old boy.

(Lights up revealing a foundation of a house in the process of being made, a 14 year-old boy digging out dirt from the boxed area of the outline of the foundation)

Gila: Nesia this is Peter (points at boy digging), Peter this Nesia (points at Nesia)

Peter: Hello Nesia (smiles then gets backs to work)

Nesia: Hello. (starts working)

Gila: Peters not from around here aren’t you, Peter.

Peter: (stops working and turns to Gila) You don’t have to tell the whole world that you know.

Gila: Well you’re not, and you’re not even Jewish.

Nesia: (stops working) You’re not?

Peter: (scowling at Gila) I’m not.

Nesia: Then why are you here?

Peter: I came here with my family for a vacation but a robber was arrested in public and to get out of trouble he pointed at us saying we were Jewish, when in fact we are Christian. My parents died trying to prove we are Christians and I got sent here.

Nesia: Wow, that is really bad, bad as mine. (smiles for assurance and Peter smiles back, then went back from work)

Narrator: Over the next few weeks, Nesia saw people come and go through the concentration camps. Many people died at the hand of the S.S. Guards, for either, torture of stealing food, not working hard enough, or just sheer pleaser. Many Jews died because of starvation, but lucky for Nesia, Sophie gave her extra food. Nesia began to ponder why Sophie was treating them so nicely, but she soon learned from Gila that Sophie was actually a Jew in disguised as a Nazi to help people survive. Nesia soon realized that if she never met Sophie she might be dead. And the scariest thing is that when she was working at the convention belt, she sees people get hurt and the guards take them away and she never sees them again. She prayed that neither she nor her friends would ever get hurt and leave her, but it seems her prayer was unanswered. (Blackout.)
EmeraldCranberryJuice
this is so good... i love a good holocaust story... I like the edge of depression/sadness mixed with a slight chance of hope.
Rydko
Scene 2: The Accident
(Scene opens with Nesia and Gila sitting in the corner talking. Nesia looks older than first scene.)

Gila: Admit it.

Nesia: I don’t know what you are talking about. (Blushing, looking in the other direction)

Gila: Oh, yes you do.

Nesia: No I don’t.

Gila: I see you staring at him ALL the time at work.

Nesia: I do not!

Gila: (imitating Nesia in a high pitch voice) Oh gosh, I hope Peter notices me staring him, then we can kiss, and then be lovebirds. (laughs)

Nesia: (scowling) I DO NOT act like that.

Gila: True, but you do stare at him most of the time. (Nesia looks down saying nothing) If you don’t tell him that you like him, I will.

Nesia: (mortified) You wouldn’t.

Gila: Oh, but I would. (Bell rings for work) Oh, lets go tell Peter our little secret. (She stands up and runs)

Nesia: (runs after her) Gila wait. (Gila stops) Fine I’ll tell him.

Gila: (Whispers to herself) Works every time.

Nesia: What did you say?

Gila : Oh, nothing (starts walking) By the way if you don’t tell him in five minutes, I’m telling him.

Nesia: Fine (They walk off to the site. They see Peter already there waiting for them, Gila looks with a raised eyebrow, Nesia ignores her, smiles) Hey, Peter.

Peter: (smiles) Hey Nesia, Gila, what’s up?

Gila: (smirks) Oh nothing, nothing.

Peter: (confuse) What’s up with her? (pointing at Nesia who looks nervous)

Gila: Don’t mind her, I’ll just go and grab the equipment and leave you two alone. (winks)

Peter: (still confuse) What’s going on here?

Nesia: Nothing… um… so what’s…new?

Peter: Um, nothing really, are your sure you’re okay? (Nesia is now really red)

Nesia: Yes, it’s just… Gila is acting really crazy right now so don’t her any attention.

Peter: Okay… hey did you hear about the war?

Nesia: No, what happened?

Peter: (whispers) It looks like the Allies are winning the war, rumors are spreading that they are going to release us when the war is over.

Nesia: Really that’s great… so what are you going to do when the war is over.

Peter: I don’t really know, probably go back to America and live with my grandparents.

Nesia: (disappointed) Oh, really… so you’re not staying.

Peter: No… why?

Nesia: Well you see I… um…

Peter: Yes?

Nesia: You see, I… uh… kind of l-

Gila: (interrupts) Okay, Nesia, your five minutes are up (Gila enters with the equipment)
Hey Peter guess what.

Peter: (looks) What? (Horrified) Gila watch out! (Nesia looks up. A person just slumped over from starvation, right in front of Gila. Gila doesn’t notice the body in front her)

Gila: (Doesn’t notice Peter’s warning) Peter! Guess who likes- (she trips over the body and fumbles with the equipment and falls. A shovel lands on the ground pointing upwards. Gila falls on top of it. She screams on the top of her lungs [for this use stage blood and use half of a shovel in its place and have it glued onto her shoulder] blood is seen everywhere)

Nesia: (running to Gila) Oh my god, Gila, are you okay?! (Guards come rushing over with stretchers)

Gila: (smiles weakly) Maybe I’ll be the one (winces in pain) who comes back from the hospital.

Nesia: No, this can’t be happening (the guards carries Gila away)

Guard: Weg mit dir, schmutziger Jud!

Peter: Nesia, come on. (pulling her away, Nesia is in tears and Peter is holding her, patting her on the top of her head, whispering) It will be okay, it will be okay.

Narrator: That night, Gila didn’t return, nor the next or the next. She didn’t return at all. Nesia began to lose faith in her return. Gila was replaced with a new girl, Lisa, a shy little girl not as much fun as Gila. Peter tried to comfort Nesia whenever he could but it never worked. When Gila went away, a piece of Nesia went with her. She didn’t feel like she would ever be the same.(Blackout.)
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