okay title: That Ice Cream Girl
Characters: Macy Coller,Kevin Kyler, Kristen Standler, Maybelle Lowry, Stephiene Goldberg, Jason Exler, Jake Ryan, Maxy Meyers
summary: Macy Coller is just a normal girl working at an ice cream shop called: Icey Sweet Treat. Kevin Kyler is a rock star an piled under an ego additude. These two are the completely different but somehow perfect for each other. One accident brings theses two lives together. They battle it out , developing a relationship on the way.
But there is always complications. And you end up questioning your heart.
I KNOW I KNOW CHESSY OH WELL!!! PLEASE IF YOU HATE IT THEN JUST LEAVE THIS TOPIC AND WHEN YOU LEAVE DONT LEAVE NEGATIVE COMMENTS AND FRANKLY I DONT HAVE TO DEAL WITH THAT
KIND OF PEOPLE.
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ps. characters are like disney almost but oh well....
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Full Version: That Ice Cream Girl
Interesting beggining, I like how it is in play format. Can't wait to read more!
QUOTE (Rydko @ Jul 6 2009, 03:33 PM) 
Interesting beggining, I like how it is in play format. Can't wait to read more!
LOL thank you but anyway i'm gonna rewrite the beginning ,when i wrote that part it was around 2 or 1 am didnt really have much creativity....
but hey i have a a video about this stories on youtube!
channel is www.youtube.com/inspriationstar007
also i have a blogspot under that same username maybe check itn out sometime if you want
Chapter 1.
Macy Coller was all smiles at the counter.
Costumer: May i please have a 2 chocolate ice cream with sprinkle?
Macy: Sure no problem, i will me with you and your order in a mintue.
Costumer: Thank you miss.
Macy: No problem.
Maxy: Macy i will take care of the order you just stay at the cashier.
Macy: You sure?
Maxy: Yup!
Macy: Well i have no costumer, hey im going to turn on the t.v.
Maxy: k!
New Reporter: This just in rock star Kevin kyler is back in his hometown New jersey!
New Jersey Fans are all already starting a chaos down by Kevin new condo.
Maxy: Stupid craze fans.
Macy: you got that right, i mean what do they see in him? he shallow!
Maxy: Jealous?
Maxy smirk.
Macy: Shut up! I'm not jealous just speaking the truth!
Macy blushed deep down she thought that Kevin Kyler was kinda cute.
Maxy: ahuh if you didn't blush i would have believe you.
Before Macy could reply a costumer appeared at the cashier.
While taking everyone order, Maxy had gone to see her mom during her break. So Macy was alone. A herd of screaming girl chases some guy down the street. The guy wasnt just some guy it was Kevin Kyler!
Kevin: Quick let me hide!
Macy: huh what?!
Kevin; HIDE ME!!!!
Macy: uh uh yeah Ok
Macy led Kevin down to the back of the shop.
They hid in the supply closet. It was pretty stuffy.
After the screaming was over, Macy went to the fornt of the shop to see if they were gone.
Macy: Cost clear
Kevin: Thank god!
And he started to walk away.
Macy: Thank god? Thank me, Macy the one that actually helped you.
Kevin: yeah yeah!
Macy ran up to him and slip on some spilled ice cream and fell and she took Kevin along with her.
They embrace for what seems like a century. Until she heard her manager.
Manager: Macy? Macy? We have to close up the shop now. Crazy Fans are stack up outside!
Kevin: I thought you said they were gone.
Macy: They were.
Kevin: ah hey can you get off of me?!
Macy: oh yeah
Macy statred blushing.
The manager poped in.
Manager: Macy did you....
Kevin: Hey
Manager: why hello mr. Kyler.
Kevin: Hello Mrs. Treat.
Macy: You guys know each other?
Manager: When Kevin was little he would also come here after school.
Macy: Oh
Kevin: Well the fans are gone i'm going to head out now.
Manager: Did the fan chase you all the way here?
Kevin: Yeah, thank god i hid in the supply closet or i will be devoured by now.
Macy: Hey....
Manager: Macy cleans that puddle of ice cream
Macy: Fine.
Kevin gave her a smirk.
She gave him glare.
While wiping the floor she mumbled about how rude Kevin was.
Kevin snuck behind Macy and whispered into her ear:
Kevin: Girl loves rude boys, right Macy sweetie?
Macy Spun around and her face was 1/2 in away from Kevin's.
Her hearted started to pace.
Macy: Who you called sweetie, and to bad i'm one of the girl that doesn't like ride boys.
she finally catch her breath to let that out.
Kevin: Well learn to love it, SWEETIE
He wiped a smeck of ice cream on Macy nose
And he walked out of the shop with a cap that says: Icey Sweet Treat
and ran off.
Macy wiped her nose
Macy: What a JERK!
Authors note: Sorry long chap kinda long.
Macy Coller was all smiles at the counter.
Costumer: May i please have a 2 chocolate ice cream with sprinkle?
Macy: Sure no problem, i will me with you and your order in a mintue.
Costumer: Thank you miss.
Macy: No problem.
Maxy: Macy i will take care of the order you just stay at the cashier.
Macy: You sure?
Maxy: Yup!
Macy: Well i have no costumer, hey im going to turn on the t.v.
Maxy: k!
New Reporter: This just in rock star Kevin kyler is back in his hometown New jersey!
New Jersey Fans are all already starting a chaos down by Kevin new condo.
Maxy: Stupid craze fans.
Macy: you got that right, i mean what do they see in him? he shallow!
Maxy: Jealous?
Maxy smirk.
Macy: Shut up! I'm not jealous just speaking the truth!
Macy blushed deep down she thought that Kevin Kyler was kinda cute.
Maxy: ahuh if you didn't blush i would have believe you.
Before Macy could reply a costumer appeared at the cashier.
While taking everyone order, Maxy had gone to see her mom during her break. So Macy was alone. A herd of screaming girl chases some guy down the street. The guy wasnt just some guy it was Kevin Kyler!
Kevin: Quick let me hide!
Macy: huh what?!
Kevin; HIDE ME!!!!
Macy: uh uh yeah Ok
Macy led Kevin down to the back of the shop.
They hid in the supply closet. It was pretty stuffy.
After the screaming was over, Macy went to the fornt of the shop to see if they were gone.
Macy: Cost clear
Kevin: Thank god!
And he started to walk away.
Macy: Thank god? Thank me, Macy the one that actually helped you.
Kevin: yeah yeah!
Macy ran up to him and slip on some spilled ice cream and fell and she took Kevin along with her.
They embrace for what seems like a century. Until she heard her manager.
Manager: Macy? Macy? We have to close up the shop now. Crazy Fans are stack up outside!
Kevin: I thought you said they were gone.
Macy: They were.
Kevin: ah hey can you get off of me?!
Macy: oh yeah
Macy statred blushing.
The manager poped in.
Manager: Macy did you....
Kevin: Hey
Manager: why hello mr. Kyler.
Kevin: Hello Mrs. Treat.
Macy: You guys know each other?
Manager: When Kevin was little he would also come here after school.
Macy: Oh
Kevin: Well the fans are gone i'm going to head out now.
Manager: Did the fan chase you all the way here?
Kevin: Yeah, thank god i hid in the supply closet or i will be devoured by now.
Macy: Hey....
Manager: Macy cleans that puddle of ice cream
Macy: Fine.
Kevin gave her a smirk.
She gave him glare.
While wiping the floor she mumbled about how rude Kevin was.
Kevin snuck behind Macy and whispered into her ear:
Kevin: Girl loves rude boys, right Macy sweetie?
Macy Spun around and her face was 1/2 in away from Kevin's.
Her hearted started to pace.
Macy: Who you called sweetie, and to bad i'm one of the girl that doesn't like ride boys.
she finally catch her breath to let that out.
Kevin: Well learn to love it, SWEETIE
He wiped a smeck of ice cream on Macy nose
And he walked out of the shop with a cap that says: Icey Sweet Treat
and ran off.
Macy wiped her nose
Macy: What a JERK!
Authors note: Sorry long chap kinda long.
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